nice try
i give you props for trying something so grand, but its just not that good. i bet if you went back and redid everything now, it would be far greater and a lot more people would enjoy it. a lot of akward pauses, and a lot of distortion in the sound. im sure that you know better now. as for the story, it could be better. if it wasnt based on perfect dark and starred kirby, i dont think it would have done as well. but good job, and please dont put multiple start buttons.